I can see that you’re EXHAUSTED, Johanna, but you still managed to put this delightfully eerie poem together in a way that lingers and haunts the mind long after it is read.
As for dancing “in madness glade’, you have somehow managed to make that act sound like a very inviting thing to do, especially if that feeling of exhaustion and lethargy has passed.
This is one of your best poems, my friend, and I really like the picture you’ve included with it.
I can see that you’re EXHAUSTED, Johanna, but you still managed to put this delightfully eerie poem together in a way that lingers and haunts the mind long after it is read.
As for dancing “in madness glade’, you have somehow managed to make that act sound like a very inviting thing to do, especially if that feeling of exhaustion and lethargy has passed.
This is one of your best poems, my friend, and I really like the picture you’ve included with it.